Request sought, among other items, payroll and insurance documents. Agency provided a responsive record on appeal. Agency did not prove that a portion of the withheld record was exempt as employee written criticisms, or reflected internal predecisional deliberations, or constituted employee's personal notes. The OOR's in camera review revealed that a portion of the withheld record was nonresponsive. Granted in part, denied in part and dismissed as moot in part.
